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DEATH by xxxYamiHimexxx DEATH by xxxYamiHimexxx
okay, i had this picture in my stash for ages, i submitted it like...2 days ago, and i wrote this poem like......umm.......last year or something, and i just found it lying around on my desk (which is a complete mess) so i put them together :D
the poem doesnt make much sense :P i wrote this on one of my depressed days :P
my other weird poetry thats kinda like this: [link]

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thanks so much for the faves, ive tried to thank all of you but dA thinks im spamming TT.TT
but thank you so much ^^
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fluffypufflove Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
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Morten619 Featured By Owner May 12, 2012
That was awesome...
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xxxYamiHimexxx Featured By Owner May 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks ^^
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infernus8sit4amet6 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
i wubz it! :D
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xxxYamiHimexxx Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks ^^
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PwnKage Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2012
ABSOLUTELY AMAZING AND HEARTFELT.

I love the very "chicken-scratch" style you'd captured here, at first it seems to stem from immaturity and a vague knowledge of how to draw, but it's definitely a very deliberate style you've portrayed. It's perhaps the most nuanced expression of charcoal? is it? I've ever seen. The slight awkward smudges around the solitary figure, evince a poignant recollection of wistfulness.

The acrostic poem itself is typed in an ordinary fashion, nonetheless the use of the two contrasting fonts really brings out the message of the poem. The larger letters, round-ended and capitalised, serves as emphasis for the word, "DEATH" The smaller semi-cursive font explicates an astoundingly intriguing prose-like poem which, may seem completely amateur and pathetically written, but is actually perhaps an even better exploration of death than Shakespeare's Greatest Tragedies.

A common misconception with art is that you have to actually use a great composition, obviously this piece subverts such trifling expectations with putting the poem to the far left so that the audience cannot decide exactly what to focus on. It is also often thought that artworks should have actual effort put into them, no such pervasive ideal is present here! The piece isn't even cropped properly! Nor does the shading create any sort of depth of field, nor does the figure have any sense of proportion. Effort, as exemplified by this wonderful, striking piece, is but an artless concept.

Best work I've seen all year, a definite 5 out of 5 stars.
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xxxYamiHimexxx Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you so much! :D
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Teagziee Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2012  Student General Artist
Nice! You even got it to most popular, awesome work c:
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xxxYamiHimexxx Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thankies!! <3
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Teagziee Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2012  Student General Artist
You're welcome c:
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